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Halloween_Girl
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Could you rate this poem for me?

Post by Halloween_Girl » Sat Aug 04, 2007 12:00 pm

IT'S HALLOWEEN!
Pumpkins with cut out smiles, decorations that go on for miles!
Trick-or-treaters on their way, so there is only one thing thing to
Say, Happy Halloween, look at those stars gleam! Ghost and
Witches, Vampires, and pumpkins, its Halloween to my assumption!
Beware Beware your in for a scare
The chair is rocking but nobodies there
The owls are mocking the Ghost are stocking
Beware Beware your in for a scare!

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Post by Halloween_Girl » Sat Aug 04, 2007 12:13 pm

PLZ PLZ PLZ, vote! :(
Beware Beware your in for a scare
The chair is rocking but nobodies there
The owls are mocking the Ghost are stocking
Beware Beware your in for a scare!

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Post by One Eye'd Jack » Sat Aug 04, 2007 10:04 pm

Yes, Halloween girl, I do like you're poem. Have you written any others? If not this is a really good first try. I've never thought about rhyming pumpkins with assumption before but, ya know, now that I've read it, it kind of works. Good job!

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Post by Haunted Horseman » Sat Aug 04, 2007 10:52 pm

Nice first poem. Keep it up. Love to read Halloween poems.

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Post by Halloween_Girl » Tue Aug 28, 2007 8:59 pm

I have MANY more trust me! I post some more if you want!
Beware Beware your in for a scare
The chair is rocking but nobodies there
The owls are mocking the Ghost are stocking
Beware Beware your in for a scare!

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Post by Haunted Horseman » Wed Aug 29, 2007 12:27 pm

Always interested in reading new poems. Keep 'em coming.

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Post by Halloween_Girl » Wed Aug 29, 2007 4:50 pm

k,
Little princesses, a lion with a mane. LOOK! Spiderman with Mary Jane! Children running from house to house, oh look a country mouse! Ladies in waiting Tigger and Pooh. Look at that! It's the old lady in the shoe! With Jack-o-Lanterns lighting the way, there is only one thing to say," Look at this scene it's HALLOWEEN"!


probley not as good as the first but... I like it ! :)
Beware Beware your in for a scare
The chair is rocking but nobodies there
The owls are mocking the Ghost are stocking
Beware Beware your in for a scare!

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Post by Halloween_Girl » Sun Sep 16, 2007 9:30 pm

Hush child listen here for this great holiday comes once a year!
Children run from house to house but trust me nothing will be
quiet like a mouse! This is your fiest yer of Trick-or-treating
and you and your friends will have this meeting. To run and trot
side by side and then look up to see the witches glide.
Beware Beware your in for a scare
The chair is rocking but nobodies there
The owls are mocking the Ghost are stocking
Beware Beware your in for a scare!

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